I'd like to add some narration to this video (it is long) but I would like some feedback on which segments work better and which ones should be removed.

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Any help would be appreciate it (also if you subscribe to the channel I'll be very grateful)

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The current cut is this one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hsy-2ik_lGI

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My plan is to talk a little bit about the areas of the city where the art is concentrated and a also about the artists, hopefully I'll get some to talk on camera.